Showing posts with label romance novels. Show all posts
Showing posts with label romance novels. Show all posts

Saturday, November 28, 2009

Saturday Snippets: Departures




Today's Saturday excerpts are all about departures.

My excerpt takes departures to the extreme. If you know me, you know I love what my kids term "end of the world movies". Picture "2012", "Knowing", "Independence Day" and "Day After Tomorrow" to get an idea.

Astronaut Major David Randolph is the last human male alive after Earth blows up. Colonel Genie Siska and David witness Earth's explosion from their space ship. In shock and despair, the couple run through a myriad of emotions. Although Genie's always been highly attracted to the major, he's also fourteen years younger than her. Even though he's literally the last man left alive, she still doesn't know if she can take a man so much younger than her as her lover.


David's always been in love with his commanding officer, and he's frustrated that even now, she resists him. They are literally mankind's last chance for survival. Or are they? When they are "rescued" or is it kidnapped by aliens, the whole picture changes. However, they are not sure if it's for better or worse.



Excerpt from: Last Man on Earth

USAF Colonel Genie Siska gaped at the blinding lights pinpointing the Earth. In shock, she wasn’t sure if she was speaking aloud or thinking, “My dear God. What’ve they done? How could they?”

“God save our souls,” Major David Randolph whispered beside her. His shoulder crowded hers and his hip bumped her as he ran back to his station.

The com channels were frantic with chatter. Maydays arose in every language. Reports of massive death and destruction filled Genie’s ears as she stared in disbelief from the command link to the planet below. Her fingers dug into the ledge in front of her, and she feared she’d sink to the ground if she let go. “How can they do this?”

She prayed to God for forgiveness and deliverance.

“Don’t just stand there, Colonel!” David grabbed her and dragged her into their escape ship. “We’ve got to get out of here now. If the planet explodes, it’ll blast apart the station.”

Earth explode?

She gulped. Her heart shattered as she envisioned the fiery deaths of all the children of Earth. The babies. The animals. All innocents. None deserving of the fate their elders decreed.

Mutely, swallowing hard, hoping David’s words weren’t prophetic, she forced herself to focus. But she couldn’t wrap her mind around the possible reality.

She helped David steer the ship out into space far enough for safety but close enough to see their home. When he put his arm around her, she didn’t demur. Rather, she wrapped her arms around him and laid her cheek on his shoulder, taking comfort from his steady heartbeat and the rise and fall of his chest. “Why is this happening?”

He squeezed her shoulder and huskily murmured, “Who really knows? Greed? Selfishness? Stupidity? Religious fanaticism?”

A sad snort arose from her lips, and she struggled to hold back tears and not damn all the religious nuts to hell. For heaven’s sake, USAF Colonels didn’t cry. In particular, female officers couldn’t show such weakness or her troops lose respect. She’d rather be a tough bitch. But against orders, tears clung to her lashes, and she tried to blink them back. “So we blew ourselves up in the name of God?”

He pressed his lips to her temple. “Quite possibly. We’ll never know.”

He sounded so much more mature than his mere twenty-eight years, and she burrowed into his strength.

The ship rocked with shock waves, and she gasped. Blinding light and meteors hurled at them.

“Damn! The idiots really did it,” David seethed and gathered her closer and held her tightly as if he craved the human contact.

Anxious for affirmation she wasn’t alone in the big, cold universe, she clutched him. Tears dropped unchecked from her eyes and sobs racked her throat. Although she’d never married nor had children, her heart ached for her nephew and her sister, for all the lost souls, for lost dreams, for the terror and pain everyone must have felt.

Furious at the sons of bitches who’d turned the doomsday switches, she flung back her head and howled her rage, and she pummelled her fists against David’s chest. “We’re dead! This is the end of the human race. How could we?”

A million visions collided in her mind, changing with such lightning speed she grew dizzy and crumpled to the floor. Gasping for air, her sobs came on hiccoughs. Irony in her voice, she mused, “I never thought it fair to marry or have kids as I thought my mission too dangerous, that I’d be the one to die in this godforsaken space…and now we’re the only ones left.”

David hunkered down on his haunches and stroked her face. His intensely blue gaze bore into her. Very sombrely and seriously he said, “We weren’t the only satellite orbiting Earth. The Russians and the Chinese are up here, too.”

“If they didn’t get pulverised.” Acid tears burned her eyes and hovered on her lashes. They burned her eyes much like the explosion burned away Earth’s atmosphere.

Again, David pulled her close and rocked back and forth with her in his arms. “Shush. We’ll make it. We’re resilient.”

She peeked out the window at the spookily empty space—empty barring all the dust and debris from their home.

Damn it! It shouldn’t be so beautiful, like sparkling fairy dust.

Last Man on Earth is available at Total-E-Bound.

Read more departures here: Vivian ArendJody Wallace, Kelly Maher, Eliza Gayle, Lauren Dane, Taige Crenshaw, Shelley Munro, Savannah Foley, Moira Rogers

Sunday, October 04, 2009

Romance Without Romance?

Have you ever read a romance without romance?


Unfortunately, I have. It was a lot like the time I ordered a Southwest Salad at Wendy’s and only got the lettuce, no chili. Bland, bland, bland.

The day I got the salad (a friend went through the drive through and didn’t check my order to notice there was no chili) I ate the plain lettuce as I was starved and didn’t have time or money to get more food. But I didn’t enjoy it and I was mad at Wendy’s for awhile for cheating me. I also boycotted them for a time.

When I read a book labeled as a “romance”, sweet, erotic, or in-between, I want my romance.

I don’t mind sex. I don’t mind no sex. But I want to fall in love. I want to savor the emotional journey. I want to lose myself in the magic.

A romance writer myself, I try very hard to put a lot of romance in my romances. I also know how tough it is, especially in short erotic stories where the editor demands a lot of sex up front as well as often in the book. It’s a real juggle to fit in all the required elements.

It’s sort of a joke: “More sex, more sex, more sex.” But it’s not. My editors are deadly serious. That’s what sells their lines. I hear their mantra in my sleep. They do not mean, however, “less romance”.

Still, when you’re writing a story under 15,000 words, it’s a real test of talent and every scene has to zing. An even greater challenge is trying to write 1,000 words or less like I’ve been doing lately for the Log & Short Reviews. As of today, L&S has only published one of my ultra short stories and I’m waiting for work whether not my three other submissions made the cut.

Don’t get me wrong. I like sex and reading about it. As a kid I used to dog earl all the juicy scenes in my Harlequins to reread and I occasionally snuck into my Dad’s stash of his, uh, romance.

However, if I had to make a choice between lots of romance with no sex or lots of sex with little or no romance, I’d choose romance every time.

So what is romantic?

Here’s what I think is romantic: love, longing, affection, caring, pining, awareness of the other, hope, poignant memories, heartache. I may have missed some characteristics, but notice, I did not say anything about sex.

Again, please don’t misunderstand. I’m not dissing sexy books. I love them – as long as they include romance. To me, romance is the sexiest thing there is.


Recent posts you might like to read:


Sayonara Baby

Don't Bomb Your Audience With Turkeys

Are You Writing Me Into Your Book?

Dont Give Up Too Early

Welcome to the Spookiest Month of the Year (+ don't burn your Ouija Board!)

Friday Fill-ins Oct. 2 (& e-Readers)


You'll also want to see what Amarinda Jones, Anika Hamilton, Anny Cook,
Barbara Huffert, Brynn Paulin, Bronwyn Green, Dakota Rebel, Kelly Kirch,
Molly Daniels, Sandra Cox, Regina Carlysle, and Cindy Spencer Pape
are up to, so make sure to visit them also. :)

Saturday, September 26, 2009

Snippet Saturday: 1st Paragraphs

Today's Snippet Saturday theme is "First Paragraphs".

I looked through my first paragraphs and chose a few fun ones to brighten up your weekend.

First paragraphs are tough to write. They're supposed to hook your reader. Even before that they have to hook your acquiring editor.

Thus, you might have to polish (rewrite!) your first paragraph until you have it right. It's your audition and if you fail, you might not get another chance.

Truth, Justice

& The Vampire Way

Acid rose in Genevieve’s throat. Biting back a sigh, she shook her head with resignation. Pushing her dark sunglasses down the bridge of her nose, she hid her intense displeasure. Would she have to baby sit Constantine forever? Sometimes this vampire queen biz sucked!

Read an excerpt...

American Beauty

“You want me to pretend be what?” Brad Mueller shook his head. Maybe he should get his hearing tested. The Ft. Lauderdale criminal element had been using him as target practice a lot lately. Perhaps the ear-shattering gunfire had affected his eardrums more than he’d realized. He certainly couldn’t have heard what he thought he’d just heard.

Read an excerpt...

Purrfect Justice 
  

“Meow! Here kitty, kitty, kitty.”

Another creep fancies himself a stand up comic. Haley Yates rolled her eyes and suppressed a sigh. She took a long swig of the soda in her hands, about ready to spike it. Why, oh why did every cop with at least one drink in him think he was a comedian? They’d been meowing at her since she’d first crossed the threshold to the Ft. Lauderdale-Miami Policeman’s Halloween party. Read an excerpt... Here are several more great authors with lots more scintillating first paragraphs for you. Kelly Maher Jody Wallace Shelli Stevens Michelle Pillow Lauren Dane Leah Braemel Jaci Burton Elisabeth Naughton McKenna Jeffries Moira Rogers Taige Crenshaw Vivian Arend Juliana Stone Anya Bast Lacey Savage Shelley Munro Sasha White Former posts you might like to read also: Why Write Free Short Stories (How to) Send the Pirates to Davy Jones Locker How Long Does It Take To Be Published? Snippet Saturday: Kick Ass Heroes and Heroines Kudos to Harlequin Twitter Works You'll also want to see what Amarinda Jones, Anika Hamilton, Anny Cook, Barbara Huffert, Brynn Paulin, Bronwyn Green, Dakota Rebel, Kelly Kirch, Molly Daniels, Sandra Cox, Regina Carlysle, and Cindy Spencer Pape are up to, so make sure to visit them also. :)

Saturday, November 15, 2008

Sucky, suckier, and suckiest

Romances don’t only deal with love but with conflict. If the conflict is lukewarm, the romance isn’t very compelling – at least not to view as a third party. If there is no conflict, who would want to read about it? Conflict makes the sparks burn brighter. It promotes character growth. It keeps readers on the edge of their seat. Without conflict, the whole story would read “And they lived happily ever after. The end.” Snooze alert… Conflict, the more the better, or in other words, the tighter the screws are turned, the suckier the situation is for the hero and heroine, the high the interest value. The more we, the readers, want to see them overcome and succeed. Most of us know the story of Joseph and the many colored dream coat from the Bible and more recently of Donny Osmond fame in the movie. Joseph starts off as a snobby little brat who has things so easy his brothers hate him. In fact they hate him so much they want him dead and try to kill him. But Joseph not only survives, he goes from one sucky situation to a suckier situation and an even suckier situation yet. Along the way, he grows up and becomes a wonderful man, one who has been honed in the fire so that he becomes a great leader and ends up saving his own family as well. In Star Wars, Luke Skywalker and company are subjected to one life-threatening event to another, almost non-stop. They jump into a chute to save their skins just to find out it’s a death chamber that’s worse. In the most recent Indiana Jones movie, Indy escapes the gun-happy Russians just to find himself in the middle of a nuclear test site and nearly gets blown up by the A-bomb. Of course not all stories have to be so action packed. Sucky things can happen to normal people, too. We suffer our own dramas – loss of job, stock market crashes, hurricanes, tornadoes, car and plane wrecks, illness, rifts with family and friends, breakups, demotions, unexpected bills… The list goes on and on. Life is filled with sucky things that can be used as fodder in our stories. Conflict can change within the story. One of my favorite movies is “Showboat” , the version with Howard Keel and Kathryn Grayson and Ava Gardner. The first conflict is when Julie is kicked off the showboat and her life goes downhill forever more. Then the story focuses on Magnolia and Gaylord and how Noli’s mother tries to keep them apart. Then things get boring for awhile when Noli and Gaylord are happy newlyweds living in luxury. But then Gaylord’s gambling gets him into trouble and their fortunes turn. He can’t take it and deserts Noli. Things keep getting worse for Noli and Gaylord until finally they get back together and it’s “Saturday Night Forever” and they have their happily ever after. Of course the story ends at this point as the rest would bore us to tears now that they’re deliriously happy again. Maybe we’re masochists, enjoying others pain and torture. Maybe it just makes us feel better that we’re not the only ones suffering. Maybe it’s because it gives us an opportunity to get invested in the characters and hope things will get better. I love “end of the world” stories as my family calls them. It’s not that I really want the world to end even if I’ve blown it up in at least one of my books. What I enjoy is the emotion and the human will to survive and overcome against all odds. I like to see the character growth such adversity brings. I like to see the big pay off, the triumph (survival on a big scale – the human race) in the end. That’s as long as there’s emotion mixed in with the story and it’s not only action adventure ad nauseum (I hated “War of the Worlds”). It didn’t slow down long enough to really get involved with the characters. They were too busy running the entire time to get to know them, to really care about them. Don’t be afraid to hurt your characters. Writing isn’t the time to be Mrs. Nice Guy. The meaner we are to them, the more adversity we make them face, the more the readers will love them. You'll also want to see what Amarinda Jones, Anika Hamilton, Anny Cook, Barbara Huffert, Brynn Paulin, Bronwyn Green, Dakota Rebel, Kelly Kirch, Molly Daniels, Sandra Cox, Regina Carlysle, and Cindy Spencer Pape are up to, so make sure to visit them also. :)

Saturday, October 04, 2008

Romantic settings

What is a romantic setting? Is it always a tropical paradise? Is it a moon drenched summer night? Is it a snow Christmas Eve in front of a blazing fire? I think it can be all and more. Some of the best romances I've read have been in snowbound cabins way north in Canada and it's not even Christmas time. Some romances I've read have beautiful settings but the romance is lacking. Setting can and should be a character in itself, but it can't carry the story. I feel fortunate to live in the sub tropics where we have beautiful moon lit beaches, lush palm trees, white sands, and warm waters. People come here from all over the world to vacation because it's so beautiful. I'm sure a lot of people hope to find romance. Several romance movies have been set in my home town of Ft. Lauderdale. Its beaches are famous world wide. Yet, I don't set all my romances here. Some yes, but some I set in other places. Why? Because romance can and does happen anywhere. Also because I have to admit I'm jaded by perpetual sunshine, but hot, sticky weather, by palm trees day in day out. Now I find a snowy Christmas Eve or Thanksgiving Day more romantic. Give me a roaring fire place with a couple glasses of sparkling champagne and a gorgeous man whose hot for me. Now I find rolling hills covered in colorful autumn leaves breath taking. I'd love to meander through a big pumpkin patch with a brisk fall breeze in October. I love to see the twinkle of Christmas lights reflected on snow and ice. I'd love to vacation at a snowy ski resort with huge romantic fire places and wintery clothes. Maybe I'm nuts. But I like variety. Don't get me wrong - I still love summer and the tropics and the beach. I love swimming in the warm waters. But I have to admit I'd love it even more if I had the change in seasons and scenery. Of course, I think I'm ADHD like my kids. I can't stand to sit still or do the same thing over and over. But since I've read romances set all over the world, in every season, and even in on other planets, I would say I'm not the only one. :) You'll also want to see what Amarinda Jones, Anika Hamilton, Anny Cook, Barbara Huffert, Brynn Paulin, Bronwyn Green, Dakota Rebel, Kelly Kirch, Molly Daniels, Sandra Cox, Regina Carlysle, and Cindy Spencer Pape are up to, so make sure to visit them also. :)

Saturday, August 23, 2008

Fabio only ranks #22?

Fabio He makes our hearts go pitter patter, especially those of us in the romance publishing world. For a long time, perhaps forever, he'll be our #1. When I signed onto AOL this morning, the beautiful Fabio was staring at me from the AOL news page and the head line read "I Can't Believe He's Only #22". I just had to read on to find out what they meant. I also wondered why a tub of butter was attached to his picture. I don't remember that commercial. Although I don't remember the commercial, I'll never forget Fabio. He's an icon in the romance writing world. According to the article Fabio was a spokesperson for "I Can't Believe It's Not Butter!" in the mid 1990s. Then I wanted to know more about Fabio, so I googled him. I was surprised to find out he and I were born in the same year and so he's just a few months older than me. Wikipedia also says, "He became famous in the romance world for appearing on hundreds of kitschy romance book covers, the first of which was Hearts Aflame in 1987." See the cover to the right. Now, according to Romantic Times it is Fabio on the cover. According to Johanna Lindsey, the author, it is not Fabio. Anyway, the dude's been on many covers. I didn't know this, but it says that "Fabio became the first male romance writer to author romance novels without the use of a pseudonym. Fabio's books were titled Pirate, Rogue, and Comanche." Unfortunately I can't find pictures of the novels Fabio penned himself. Excuse me while I segue for a moment or two. Did you catch above that Wikipedia called the covers "kitschy"? I didn't know what that meant so I followed the link. According to Wikipedia kitschy "is a term of German or Yiddish origin that has been used to categorize art that is considered an inferior, tasteless copy of an existing style. The term is also used more loosely in referring to any art that is pretentious to the point of being in bad taste, and also commercially produced items that are considered trite or crass." Of course we romance writers and readers know there has long been a debate about "bodice rippers". Personally I love these covers and it infuriates me how our industry is put down for them. So many other industries wish they had a 50% market share and such loyal customers. You'll also want to see what Amarinda Jones, Anika Hamilton, Anny Cook, Barbara Huffert, Brynn Paulin, Bronwyn Green, Dakota Rebel, Kelly Kirch, Molly Daniels, and Sandra Cox are up to, so make sure to visit them also. :)

Tuesday, March 18, 2008

Which book do I write next? (and answers about the Alpha Smart)

I stayed home from work ill today. I'm feeling quite a bit better, but am still relaxing. Actually, I'm blog hopping again. I'll start editing in a few minutes and do some writing later if I still feel okay.

For those of you who are writers, how many stories do you have running around in your head right now? How many do you have started that you have to finish?

I have approximately twenty stories started that I need to finish. There's at least ten more that I'm itching to write. I'm not sure which one to finish or start next.

It's a real dilemma. Help me out here.

Of course I have to do my edits on the book scheduled to come out April 7th at www.total-e-bound.com. That's a given.

But then what?

I'm going to Lori Foster's Readers N Writers' Get Together in Cincinnati this summer where I have one editor and one agent appointment set up. I still have some polishing to do for that manuscript so it will be ready. Right? Of course! It's almost done - I hope. That depends on what my critique partners tell me about the last few chapters. It's a sweet Harlequin-Silhouette contemporary type novel, and I hope "the one" to break me into the big time publishers and round me up an agent.

Then, however, is the sequel for an Ellora's Cave book - to Make-Believe Lover.

Then there's other sweet Harlequin-Silhouette books that are sequels to the one I'm going to pitch in June.

Then there's a sequel to a story I wrote for NCP that I'm dying to write.

Oh! There's another sequel almost done for an Ellora's Cave book also, that I need to finish and spice up. I've only been working on this one going on ten years. That's all. It's about time I finish this one.

But then there's also the erotic romance stories for TEB which I'm on a roll with. I hate to slow down my momentum there, either, but I need to speed up my momentum again with Ellora's Cave and NCP.

What to do?

I have vacation scheduled from the day job next week. I hope to get some quality writing time in (and not blog hop all day long every day). Of course, if things go right, I will get my hearing implant next Wednesday so I won't be in any shape to write, edit, or play on the Internet (at least I doubt it) for the rest of my week's vacation. By next Wednesday night, I hope to be part Borg. :)

By that for you non-Trekkies and/or who haven't seen my earlier post about the BAHA hearing implant, there will be a metal post sticking out the back of my head about the size of a hearing aid battery. Since I'm a woman and wear my hair long, it probably won't be discernible once my hair grows back. I'm sure they'll have to shave a bit of it to do the surgery. Waaa! I finally get my hair the way I like it and it'll get ruined. But it's a small price to pay.

So pray for the insurance company to get their head out of their asses and approve my surgery. They denied it three years ago because they thought it sounded like a hearing aid. It's not a hearing aid. I didn't fight it last time. This time, I'm fighting it. I could kick myself for not fighting it before - but I'm older and wiser now. As I mentioned, they denied it again, but I'm fighting.

Back to yesterday's discussion so I can answer your questions.

For those of you who wonder what an alpha smart is, here's a pic. I found it at: www.alphasmart.com. This model goes for $350. They have more expensive models.



This model of the Alpha Smart includes:

Rechargeable battery pack
AC adapter
Documents To Go Professional (Provides compatibility with Microsoft Word, Excel and Powerpoint®)
USB cable
Getting Started Guide
Palm™ Desktop Software
Additional applications, fonts, and other bonus software
Stylus






Saturday, February 23, 2008

Graphic Reading Challenge

Real quick, I'm going to post the five novels I will be reading and reviewing before the end of 2008 for a new review site I just found. I imagine I'll do more than five if allowed, but here's the first five. This is for the Graphic Reading Challenge at: http://gnchallenge.blogspot.com/search/label/challenge%20policies Rawsilk by Lisabet Sarai The Rock of Realm by Lea Schizas Wedding Jitters by Brynn Paulin Hello by Dakota Rebel Maid for Death by Amarinda Jones **Blogger friends - Please see my other new post just beneath this. I really shouldn't post twice in a day, but I found this right after I made my other post.

Friday, February 15, 2008

Don't miss the Ultimate Blog Party

I just discovered this great new site: 5 Minutes for Mom Be sure to stop by and check out the information about the upcoming Ultimate Blog Party. It’s a great way to meet some new bloggy friends and to hopefully gain some new readers at your blog. It is being held the week of March 7-14, so you still have time to decide if you want to participate and what you want to do if you do participate. As you can see, I'm participating. I'm always up to meeting new friends, promoting, and visiting new blogs. As a mom who also runs my own business from home (writing romance books) and who needs to promote, I think this is brilliant. According to 5 Minutes for Mom "Mr. Linky will go live at Friday March 7th, 12:01 am Eastern Time and participating bloggers who have their party post up can add their link any time during the week of the party. (The Linky will stay permanently in the post, so you can come back later and catch up on any blogs you may have missed.)" Okay, now I have to figure out where to find Mr. Linky. "Mr. Linky" - that makes me chuckle. Now onto a mom-type post. (Even though I've done the control I-thing, the italics won't disappear, so please ignore them if you can) I have five children - three boys, two girls. The order is: boy, boy, girl, girl, boy. The oldest three are now bona fide adults although two still live at home, eat my groceries, and hike up my phone bill. The youngest two are 17 and 13. Today, I'm focusing on the 13 year old. My youngest constantly tells me he's too sick to go to school. He did this so much, the school began protesting his many absences. After consulting with my son's teachers', we decided he can only stay home if he has a bona fide fever. Well, I couldn't find the thermometer this morning and lo and behold, he said he was too ill to go to school. He didn't have that "I'm telling the truth tone" and he didn't feel hot so I told him to go to school anyway and if he got ill later in the day, to call me. So, he went to school. Right before my lunch hour, he called "I'm sick mom. Come get me." According to him, his initial stomach ache had gone away but now he had a headache. I still didn't really believe him plus it would have been very awkward for me to leave today as my boss wanted to speak to me about something very important concerning my customer service/day job career. Thus I told him to eat lunch and then see how he felt. He didn't call back and we're both at home and he seems fine. I bought a new digital thermometer tonight which I think I'll keep in my purse as my boys have a habit of breaking and losing "accidentally" important items like thermometers, and lawn mowers. (We've had to buy so many lawn mowers as "mysteriously", they break soon after we purchase them - believe me, I'm fuming!) In fact, if the child misses a day of school and I don't call him in sick - they're going to send the truant officer to get him - with my blessings. In fact, I've threatened to call the truant officer myself to scare him to start behaving and attend school. Has anybody else had a problem child who tries everything to get out of school? He used to do this with karate, too. He was sick almost every single afternoon right before time to go to karate. Also, his just-washed uniform came up mysteriously missing, if we didn't buy the sick thing. I thought my oldest was an extremely hard child to deal with. The youngest one makes the oldest seem like a total angel (of course, I've not begun to scratch the surface on the 13 year old's exploits). Or maybe it's just that I'm 15 years older and tireder than when the oldest was this age. Suggestions anyone?

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